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Refine wording in chapter 1 for both zh and tw translations.

Change 1:

Original:

Another type of system is designed for analytical workloads (queries that aggregate over many records) but embedded into user-facing products.

  • zh: 将“分析型的工作负载”调整为“分析型任务”
  • tw: 将“分析型的工作負載”调整为“分析型任務”

Change 2:

Original:

They provide more limited APIs than a typical filesystem (basic file reads and writes), but they have the advantage that they hide the underlying physical machines.

  • zh: 将“它们提供比典型文件系统更有限的 API”调整为“它们提供的 API 比典型文件系统更有限”
  • tw: 将“它們提供比典型檔案系統更有限的 API”调整为“它們提供的 API 比典型檔案系統更有限”

Change 3:

Original:

Many cloud services present an API that hides the individual machines that actually implement the service.

  • zh: 将“许多云服务提供了 API 来隐藏实际实现服务的单个机器”调整为“许多云服务会通过 API 隐藏其背后具体承载服务的机器”
  • tw: 将“許多雲服務提供了 API 來隱藏實際實現服務的單個機器”调整为“許多雲服務會透過 API 隱藏其背後具體承載服務的機器”

Change 4:

Original:

If your data volume or computing requirements grow bigger than a single machine can handle, you can potentially spread the load across multiple machines.

  • zh: 将“你可以潜在地将负载分散到多台机器上”调整为“你可以考虑将负载分散到多台机器上”
  • tw: 将“你可以潛在地將負載分散到多臺機器上”调整为“你可以考慮將負載分散到多臺機器上”

Change 5:

Original:

This is more difficult on a single machine, which needs to be provisioned to handle the maximum load, even at times when it is barely used.

  • zh: 将“这在单台机器上更困难,它需要按处理最大负载的情况进行配置,即使在几乎不使用的时候也是如此”调整为“这在单台机器上更难做到,因为即使大部分时间几乎用不上这些资源,也必须按最大负载来预配置资源”
  • tw: 将“這在單臺機器上更困難,它需要按處理最大負載的情況進行配置,即使在幾乎不使用的時候也是如此”调整为“這在單臺機器上更難做到,因為即使大部分時間幾乎用不上這些資源,也必須按最大負載來預配置資源”

Files changed:

  • content/zh/ch1.md
  • content/tw/ch1.md

@AldenWangExis AldenWangExis marked this pull request as draft June 12, 2026 08:49
@AldenWangExis AldenWangExis force-pushed the fix/typo-ch1 branch 2 times, most recently from 9650f7b to afcd504 Compare June 12, 2026 09:11
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